Bro, why can’t I touch you?
This ain’t the frickin’ seventies.
If you think you can stop me, then you’re all my frickin’ enemies.
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What the frick is up with that?
I’m gonna touch my lover, so you better never be a rat.
Big Brother:
Watchin’ over all of you.
Sounds like a cult, N.S.A., or even Santa, too.
So just try it,
Make the kids crave for touch.
They’ll start to prostitute themselves, so thank you so much.
Make us
wake up too early
While we’re
out too late.
Give us
factory work
like you
think that’s our fate.
I’m livin’.
I’m human.
My life is my own,
so get up to stop me and I’ll claim your throne.
Big Brother…
Love each other…
Big Brother…
You’re the worst sibling ever,
I’m gonna tell mother.
(Credit to my doubleplusgoodful comrade, Alex Pfefferle.)
Whoa. This is epic… your poem or your comrade’s?
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this is very intense, im so shook haha. I’m high key confused but it’s very cool at the same time 🙂
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This was such a different way of presenting the topic. I loved the contrast between the very familiar to us poem/rap style and the haunting ideas of 1984.
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